Not sure if my first message was clear, there’s two problems going on here:
Comfort wise, the general belt area is too thick, so I would change the construction.
Look wise, I don’t think the bottom would look good (on me(?)) if it were to stop with a drawstring and I’m still brainstorming ideas for that. It was all finished with a really cute red bias tape with little daisies though, I wouldn’t change that.

I agree, I really liked the drawstring. maybe I’ll construct it the same way, but use thinner material for the inside of the channel and the string itself. I don’t know about the peplum thingy though. I think it needs somethig under the drawstring still. maybe a straight panel ?

that’s very cute and very well made ! great job !